Monday, July 13, 2015

Wallbanger Chapter 11: Road Trip

Last time in Wallbanger...some non-dates, bad baking form, and a scary movie. They also fell asleep cuddling because scary movies are scary.

Chapter 11

Caroline wakes up and is having a discussion with herself over cuddling with Simon.

But I shouldn't be nooking with Simon. Brain knew better. Nerves were in agreement.”

Eyes were getting tired of Caroline's excessive compartmentalization but Brain knew better.

Caroline thinks about how Simon's parents are dead.

I was close with my parents. They still lived in the same house where I'd grown up, in a small town in southern California.”

So close that this is the first time they were mentioned. She says she likes her independence and that's why we haven't heard anything about them until now, but it feels like an excuse. She pities Simon but is impressed by his ability to not let their deaths rule his life, which I have to admit makes me happy. I'm tired of Bruce Wayne style love interests.

Caroline snuggles some more and feels the warning bells of love, another thing for the bingo card. Caroline rationalizes why they can't be together and falls asleep to Simon whispering her name.


Caroline wakes up and she is a kitty in bed. As in, she takes up all the space



My toes and Lower Caroline curled.”

Ew. No, that doesn't work like that. If any part of your genitalia curls, please consult a medical professional. Immediately.

Simon says they need to make ground rules for next time, Caroline says there won't be a next time.

He smiled that smile, and I sighed.”

That sigh?

Caroline briefly fantasizes about sex with Simon

...but I wisely got control of my inner whore.”

I will admit that I hated the “inner goddess” aspect of Ana's personality in 50 Shades, but this isn't any better. Caroline is wildly inconsistent when it comes to sex positivity. She is fine if she has a series one night stands but is disgusted by Simon's casual relationships. She says she isn't looking for love, only a good orgasm, but says she needs to control her “inner whore.” So which is it Caroline? Can women enjoy sex without being whores or not?

They make breakfast in a choreographed silence that is sweet but confuses me. What if Simon doesn't like granola with milk? What if Caroline didn't want banana? Too bad, they put it all together and chatted about work. Simon tells Caroline he is doing a local vacation piece and then meeting everyone in Tahoe and they agree to drive together.

Text between Mimi and Sophia”


They get mad because Caroline is working with her ex and talk about singalongs.

Text between Neil and Mimi”

Neil is surprised that Sophia knows how to bowl.

Text between Neil and Simon”

Simon tells Neil that he is driving Caroline and asks about Sophia.

Text between Mimi and Caroline”

I guess if nothing else this is efficient if a little boring.

Mimi scolds Caroline for not telling her about James.

Text between Caroline and Simon”

Innuendo and ocean cliffs.

Text between Caroline and Sophia”

Sophia scolds Caroline because she is working with James.

Text between Simon and Caroline”

Baking innuendo and bad driving.

'I'm not listening to this.'”


I will listen to whatever you have to play or say just don't go back to texting.

Caroline says how Simon is quickly becoming one of her favorite people and I would like this a lot more if I didn't know that they will get together. It would be nice to think that they could just be friends because some of their best scenes together are when they are just being playful and friendly.

Caroline objectifies him pretty intensely. It's forgettable, just know he is swoon worthy.


Caroline considers how feasible it would be to have sexy times while Simon drove, considering the terrain of northern California and depending were on the I-80 they are, this could end very badly. Instead, she reaches into the back seat to get cranberry-orange bread. As she does this, her bum is in the air and Simon says

'That is one sweet ass, my friend.' He sighed, leaning his head on it as though it were a pillow.”

Who does that? It's weird and kind of gross. Caroline threats to take away his bread privileges if he doesn't let up. She hands him the loaf and he eats it like Abu from Aladdin. She calls him weird, he points out that she is still interested and gives her a rakish smile.

My panties actually disintegrated.”

I would argue her use of the word “actually” but I use a similar phrase to describe many swoon worthy people so I will let it slide. And with a Han Solo

I know”

we get a

They arrive and as they exit the car they talk cocktails. They both thought to make Harvey Wallbangers and jokes are made. Caroline says

'Please, you would make up a drink and call it Pink Nightie just to have me in your mouth – and don't even try to lie'”

Simon is all



Then everything gets all tense and serious before Simon breaks it and says they should join their friends. They find them with their love interests (and not their partners) on the back porch. Caroline says that making the relationship swap may be easier than she thought but then Simon says

'You think its gonna be that easy?”

Simon was the one who thought it would be easy in the first place? Did they switch opinions and no one thought to tell the audience? Or was this a continuity issue.

And then the chapter ends with some obvious symbolism about how what they are all looking for is right in front of them.

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